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After recieving feedback from my previous sequence, I decided to make a few changes in order to make my thriller meet the typical conventions needed to make a good thriller.

I firstly decided to cut the whole beginning sequence of the three characters Grace, Sophie and Alice getting ready to go out. The reason I cut this was because it didn’t fit in with the stereotypical conventions and also it was a different storyline and wasn’t really needed. I begin the opening sequence with the graveyard scene as to me it sets a more atmospheric tone to the rest of the piece and gives it an eerie feel.  I also reduced the lighting of the piece as it was too contrasting to other scenes.

The main thing I had to work on was the titles. I was inspired by the opening titles of the thriller ‘se7en’ and so based my titles on this.  I used Adobe After Effects to complete this titles and used a Wiggler effect with a font called ‘Buffied’.  I made the titles Red and also made them jumpy, similiar to the ones in ‘se7en’.  I then put them into my piece at the opening scene with the graveyard. In order to make them work, I shortened a few and made them fit in with the opening, making a few cut to blacks to fit them in.  I put in the Producer, director at the beginning and decided to put the title at the end. This was to entice the audience and make them want to know what the piece is called at the very end.

In conclusion, these are the main changes I made to the thriller, other than a few cuts to make the scenes flow evenly. I am overall happy with my final product.

Bejeweled

As I had played Bejeweled before, I already had an understanding of the game and knew what to expect. 

After researching it and finding there are other versions of the game, I became more interested and eager to try out these different versions. I do not spend much time playing games, but found myself almost addicted to the game.

It is available on things such as Facebook, MSN and on mobiles so I was able to play it on these different devices.

I enjoy playing puzzle games and so found myself becoming more and more competitive as I played it on my own, and also against other people on the ‘Blitz’ version of the game. I find the voices on the different versions quite humorous, and so it therefore did not bother me.

In conclusion, I can definitely see why it is addictive and there are a variety of different levels and newer versions of the game to grab the audience’s attention. Although some features on the different versions may annoy other people or put them off the game which is understandable. Though overall, my experience of playing Bejeweled is definitely a positive one and encourage others to play it.

After receiving the feedback from our teacher, I went to edit the video straight away.  As a group we decided to re-film and produce a script as well so that it would look more professional, this was a good idea and it helped me with the editing as I didn’t have to cut unnecessary speech. The key things I changed in my video where:

  • I shortened the whole video and cut out unnecessary parts.
  • Shortened the length of the pictures at the beginning and made the quality of the picture better and clearer
  • There is now a distinct difference between the beginning scene and the graveyard scene.
  • I made sure there was a high level of continuity (e.g. opening sequence when they’re coming down the stairs).
  • I made sure that every transition I used, had a purpose.
  • I have used the beginning music as a motif which is repeated throughout the thriller.
  • And I have varied the different shot types and used different angles.

I found it a lot easier the second time of editing, this was because I had some feedback and knew what I was working towards. Also, I had familiarised myself with the new programs (Adobe Premiere Pro and Adobe After Effects) so I knew how to make my thriller to a higher level and gain more marks. 

Seeing as I did most of mine at home, I would often have to do something at school, export it, save it onto my memory stick, bring it home, upload it onto the computer and import it again which was a bit of a hassle at the beginning, especially when I forgot to export it.  So when we got the feedback, I learnt from my mistakes and did it all at home, only bringing it to school when I needed to.

I then created a second rough cut, in order to hopefully get more feedback which would highlight what else I needed to work on.  Below I have embedded my second rough cut:

 Doing this proved very helpful as I knew which parts needed polishing etc.

After receiving feedback I made the changes and didn’t have any other problems.

The main problems I personally had, were mainly my fault.  Because I was working with different software, I often did not back up my movie or export it correctly. This lead to problems I then had to deal with and in some cases I had to re-edit the footage.  Throughout my editing, I have been saving separate parts of the movie and working on them individually which was a big help because I could then import it straight into the main movie and have a backup. Towards the second draft I often forgot to do this which was my fault and often enough suffered the consequences.

If I could go back and change things, I definitely would. This would be in terms of not having to re-film our piece and have a script from the beginning.  Also, spend more time planning our filming as well as to not waste time. These things could have been improved greatly along with me editing the video with transitions for a reason, and not just using them to get from one scene to the other.

Overall, despite those few mistakes I did my best to make the final product as good as it could be whilst learning lots of new editing techniques along the way.

Final PowerPoint

Thriller Opening Sequence Evaluation-faith

Below is my powerpoint in the older version.

Thriller Opening Sequence Evaluation-faith

Please ignore the first link on the last slide as it incorrect. Here is the correct link:

evaluation powerpoint-rough-faith

Below is our Sound Project Powerpoint:

scarface-video-powerpoint

After completing the Powerpoint, we then had to present it to the class. We  all took it in turns to say a couple of slides each explaining the making and editing of the video.

Here is our finished sound project video:

As a group we were given the task of completing both some primary and secondary research regarding the opening sequence to a thriller that we will be completing. To summarise our methods we created a powerpoint explaining our different methods of primary research in preparation to present it to the class.

Here below is our group Powerpoint on the research we did concerning thriller films.

thriller-primary-research

Our group and our teacher Mr.Dunford had a meeting discussing our storyboard. We recieved overall feedback which foucsed on the positive and negatives of our idea, this would help make our story idea stronger and contribute to how we would film our thriller and also help with editing.

Group members;

 Anna Chapman, Vickie Paxton and Faith Adamson.

Idea;

Three girls are having a night out and meeting with friends. They wake up in a graveyard and come across different things e.g. a Ouija Board and a homeless person and by touching these, there are flashbacks that are linked to these objects. The protagonist then warns her friends that bad things will happen to them all as a consequence of playing the Ouija board, but she doesn’t reach them in time.

Strengths;

  • Organization.
  • Mise-en-scene discussed.
  • Good ideas.
  • A lot of initial shots.

Areas To Improve;

  • Get different shots of girls getting ready.
  • Use some non-deigetic music in this scene.
  • Get a shot of a hand opening the door.
  • In the graveyard scene, film the people waking up from lots of different angles.
  • Be sure to show the hand touching the object then lead into flashback
  • Contrast the flashbacks.
  • Make sure to have a high level of continuity.
  • Include more point of view shots of more than just protagonist.
  • Use lots of different angles showing superiority and inferiority.
  • Include more panning.
  • Have more eye line matches.
  • Include shots of the hands while playing on the Ouija board.
  • Include reaction shots while playing on the Ouija board.
  • Close up protagonists face at the end.

Editing Process

After getting feedback from my previous thriller opening sequence, I decided to re-edit the footage. I have made a lot of different cuts and the video is very different to how it started out. For the editing process, I mainly used Adobe’s Premiere Pro. This program was available to me at home and I found it a lot easier to use than the recommended Serif at school. I had previously had difficulty with Serif so I thought that using Premiere Pro would be a lot easier for me. Another program that came in the Adobe suite was Adobe after Effects; I used this throughout the video but especially on the second flashback.

I decided it was better to do the sequence individually then export them all together into the final movie. I did this to make sure that if I needed to re-edit anything, I could easily allocate the correct file then re-export it into the movie, it also allowed me to track anything I may have lost whilst editing the whole film together.

Here is an example of one of the sequences I cut and edited individually:

After doing this, I set about making the main movie and cutting the bits that I wanted in the film. As I filmed different parts of the movie at different points, I had to make sure they all linked together. By editing them in different windows, I could concentrate on each one and piece them together afterwards; this provided me with a backup [in case something went wrong in the main window].

I decided that to start off, I was going to have the graveyard scene as the opening to the thriller sequence as it sets the atmosphere of the rest of the thriller.  Previously, I had a getting ready scene of the girls the night before, but I decided to cut this as it is almost a different story to the rest of the thriller and doesn’t fit in with the rest of the thriller.

Before


After

As most of the thriller was filmed at different times, I made sure to edit them individually before putting them together.

I then moved onto the flashback.  Because we had already filmed the graveyard scene a couple of days before, I set off editing that first and left room for the flashback.  After filming the flashback, I opened it separately to the main film and called it Ouija board.  I then set about editing it.  This scene was filmed by Dave Badley and he stood on a chair and held the camera high up to fit us all in.  I wanted this scene to be in a circle closely linked, so Dave filmed us on the Ouija Board moving the bracelet about the board.  He filmed for a few seconds then stopped, he then moved to a different position in the room, and recorded the next bit for a few seconds.  He repeated this three times to give a variety of different shots.  Whilst this was going on, I decided that there would be no sound other than a recording Anna, Vickie and I were speaking.  We said the words; “Warning, this is not a toy. Only play once. Play at your own risk.” We repeated these words several times and said them at different times to give a more eerie effect.  I imported this sound separately and then put it into the Ouija Board clip.  At the end of us whispering those words, Vickie, Anna and I asked the board a question. This was: “Do you want us to stop”, the bracelet then led to the word ‘No’ and we then changed the angle of the camera from high, to low and it zoomed in on the word ‘No’. We then had our cast member Tim Rogers say the word ‘No’ in a very deep voice that we found quite scary.

The effects I used on Premiere Pro to link the 3 different angles and the close up of the word ‘No’ were; Cross Zoom, Centre Merge, Cross Dissolve and a Non-Additive Dissolve. These were good as they showed a passing of time as well as linking them together and they worked well with the clips.

For this flashback, I used a high bird’s eye view angle to vary the shot types and to hide our faces. I could have used different angles for example an extreme close up of the hands on the Ouija Board and reaction shots to show our reactions to playing it, but by not showing our faces it adds an atmospheric tone to the scene.

During this scene I decided that to help the mood and the Mise en scene, I added an audio file of Vickie, Anna and I saying the words “warning this is not a toy, only play once. Play at your own risk” and I thought it better to have us saying it but start one after each other and repeated a few times, getting louder and louder.  This also contributed toward the mood of this scene and adds a sense of danger as we’re playing it.  After receiving feedback from our first rough cut, I then changed the view of the flashback to have it as a quad, so having different things happen in the four screens. I did this on Serif as it was available to me at the time and it was relatively easy to use once I read the instructions.

Once this flashback was completed, I started on the other one containing Rob Strover as a homeless person. During this clip, I decided to have Rob walking along a street then picking up an Ouija Board he finds on the street. We chose to do this as a flashback because it is seen when the main protagonist sees Rob dead and wonders what happens to him.  I used a variety of different shots in this sequence for example worm’s eye view for when Rob is slowly turning around. After cutting this sequence, I decided that it would look better if it was in the night time, as it would add to the atmosphere. I went into Adobe after Effects and used a Day and Night effect, I used this to tone down the brightness of the clip and make it look like it was filmed during night time.

Once the two flashbacks were completed, I put them into my main movie sequence. Once I put them all together I decided that just before the end of the thriller, I would combine both flashbacks and make them literally flash quite fast across the screen.

As our project was to do a Thriller opening sequence, I had to address one of the main problems which were the titles. I decided to research the general conventions and with this knowledge applied it to further research. I looked at openings of thriller films and the one which gave me the best inspiration was the film se7en.

I decided that instead of addressing the titles first, I would leave them till last as I knew they would take up most of my time. I drew up a storyboard and put in key timings and positioning of the text.

Once this was done, I decided to follow some tutorials on YouTube and do my titles on Adobe After Effects.

After the titles were finished, I put them into my movie at the beginning and sped a few up.

Here is a snapshot of my completed movie.

Overall, I enjoyed the editing of this thriller, even though I encountered a few technical glitches along the way, I worked through them to produce an end result I was happy with.

Below is our letter concering copyright:

Letter concerning copyright

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